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Post by Jenna Fanboy on Apr 8, 2012 17:00:56 GMT -5
Title: Balto 2 Remake
Story: Ok, I think we all know that Balto 2 could have been much better. To that end, I have concocted a new storyline. Basically, it revolves around Balto being adopted by Rosy and her parents and living with Jenna as Steele attempts to seek vengeance. However, when something (I'm basically combining elements of the second and third films) happens, Steele begins to go down a path that will lead to redemption.
Cast:
Balto- Jenna Fanboy
Jenna- Sixshot1988
Steele- Sixshot1988
Boris- Sixshot1988
Nikki, Kaltag and Star- Jenna Fanboy
Rosy- Sixshot1988
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Post by Jenna Fanboy on Apr 9, 2012 8:04:59 GMT -5
It had been only a few days since the serum run had come to a close. To his complete and utter shock, Balto had something completely unexpected happen to him: out of gratitude for what he had done for their daughter, Rosy's family had adopted him as their second dog. At the moment, Rosy's father placed a brown leather collar around his neck. Once he was done, Balto looked at Jenna. "It's done, Jenna. I'm a regular dog now," he said.
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Post by sixshot1988 on Apr 9, 2012 14:44:26 GMT -5
" Balto, just because you were adopted doesn't change who you are." Jenna said. "But arn't you worried Steele will want revenge?" Luk asked as muk nodded. "Steele's selfish and a glory hound, but revenge won't help him." Jenna said
Meanwhile Steele was brooding alone. It was gone, the fame, the respect, the prestiege. He was an outcast. His owner was dead, his team hated him. He had to figure out someway to get his fame and prestiege back.
Rosie had came out from the telegram office. "Jenna, Balto, you'll never belive this, My big brother Ptrick is coming home tomarrow." She said hugging them both. "I bet he'll be happy to see balto is part of the family."
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Post by Jenna Fanboy on Apr 9, 2012 14:53:22 GMT -5
Balto was about to respond to Jenna when he heard Rosy's voice. "Come on, Jenna, we can discuss this at home," he said.
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Post by sixshot1988 on Apr 9, 2012 15:02:23 GMT -5
"Fine.I bet Patrick will be glad to see your part of the family." Jenna smiled.
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Post by Jenna Fanboy on Apr 9, 2012 15:46:48 GMT -5
Just then, Rosy's parents came out of the telegraph building and motioned her along, as they did the dogs. Balto looked at Jenna. "Hey, would you like to go with me to see Boris later? I want to tell him that I won't be going back to the boat," he said.
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Post by sixshot1988 on Apr 9, 2012 16:05:07 GMT -5
"No, I'll meet you home." Jenna said, tired of Balto seemingly dodging her questions.
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Post by Jenna Fanboy on Apr 9, 2012 16:09:12 GMT -5
Balto suddenly caught on. "Jenna, if you want to ask your questions now, go right ahead. I'm ready," he said.
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Post by sixshot1988 on Apr 9, 2012 16:13:23 GMT -5
"I asked you if you thought Patrick would be thrilled you were part of the family? considering he was the first human who was ever nice to you." Jenna asked.
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Post by Jenna Fanboy on Apr 10, 2012 15:06:33 GMT -5
Balto looked at her. "I'm sure he will be. Truth is, I barely remember him. I haven't thought about it much," he said.
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Post by sixshot1988 on Apr 10, 2012 15:25:57 GMT -5
"Well He was the one who gave you your name." Jenna said, recounting how Patrick named balto after a great explorer. "I bet you'll remember him once you see him." Jenna smiled.
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Post by Jenna Fanboy on Apr 11, 2012 14:43:39 GMT -5
Before Balto could even respond, Dixie and Sylvie appeared. Dixie ran up to Jenna as fast as her tiny little legs could carry her. "Is it true, Jenna? Your family adopted Balto?" she asked.
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Post by sixshot1988 on Apr 11, 2012 21:31:38 GMT -5
Jenna smiled. "Yes, it's true." Jenna told her friends.
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Post by Jenna Fanboy on Apr 11, 2012 21:33:55 GMT -5
Balto smiled. "Hey, Jenna, do you want to go visit Boris with me in a bit? I don't want to leave him alone without telling him where I've gone," he said, trying to ignore Dixie's pestering.
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Post by sixshot1988 on Apr 11, 2012 22:04:04 GMT -5
Jenna nodded. "Sure balto. I'll see you girls later." Jenna said as she walked off with Balto.
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